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The key to achieving high marks in your economics essay is to answer the question using relevant content, recent examples and presenting your argument in a concise and well structured format. I recommend you practice drafting some essays and asking your teacher / tutor to review them prior to your exams so you are ready when exam time comes. Below is a sample from a Band 6 essay that shows you the structure and level of detail required to get the best marks.

Question: Evaluate the effectiveness of fiscal policy in achieving economic growth and low unemployment.

Unemployment Paragraph (Using TEEL Structure)
Topic: “Fiscal policy has been very effective at achieving full employment.” A short topic sentence is all you need. Just remember to answer the question.

Explain: “Since labour is a derived demand, an expansionary fiscal policy can stimulate aggregate demand and reduce cyclical unemployment.” An ‘explain sentence’ is where you can add more detail and demonstrate your understanding of the content.

Example: “This was the case in the COVID-19 pandemic where the government implemented a $291 billion fiscal stimulus. Its centrepiece was the JobKeeper wage subsidy program. The subsidy program provided a $1500 per fortnight payment to an estimated 3.5 million workers. These measures stimulated aggregate demand and reduced cyclical unemployment.” The example must reinforce your topic and explain sentences. Ensure your example is recent (within the last 5-10 years) and has specific figures to show the impact of the policy.

Explain: “Moreover, the government’s immense efforts to reduce cyclical unemployment has lowered the possibility of hysteresis – individuals losing in-demand skills and becoming structurally unemployed in the future.” This additional explanation adds a sophisticated level of understanding. You can also write a ‘however’ statement here, where you identify a limitation of fiscal policy in achieving low unemployment. This extra layer of detail can change your essay from a Band 5 to Band 6 response.

Link: “This policy response was highly effective, as seen with unemployment peaking at 7.5% despite a forecast of 10%. And unemployment levels ‘beating’ pre-pandemic levels within 12 months of the federal budget stimulus being released.” The link sentence reinforces what you stated within your paragraph. Be sure to again answer the question and extra data can be used to demonstrate this point.

Benjamin Hickman

In the context of the English HSC, the term “unseen texts” often carries a sense of uncertainty and challenge. However, when we delve deeper, the idea of an “unseen” text becomes less about the unfamiliarity of its content and more about our ability to connect with it. Despite the newness of the material, we all share a universal trait — human empathy. This intrinsic understanding of emotions, struggles, and experiences transcends boundaries of time, culture, and personal background.

The beauty of this lies in our capacity to recognize and relate to human experiences, whether through literature, poetry, or other forms of expression. Unseen texts, then, are not entirely “unseen”; they merely require a conscious effort to bridge the gap between the author’s message and the reader’s understanding. The themes explored in these texts — such as loss, love, conflict, or triumph — resonate with the collective human experience, which is, in essence, universal.

When we approach a text with empathy, we step into the shoes of the characters or the writer, seeing the world through their eyes. This human connection helps us comprehend the underlying messages and the emotional weight carried by the text. It encourages us to appreciate the layers of meaning beyond just words, allowing us to draw from our own experiences and insights.

Thus, the challenge of unseen texts in the English HSC is not about confronting the unknown but rather about recognizing that, at a fundamental level, we already have the tools to understand and interpret them. Our shared human experiences make these texts more accessible than we might initially think. All it takes is a willingness to listen, reflect, and connect.

Mary Diamond

In today’s world, where phones buzz constantly and notifications appear every few minutes, one of the greatest challenges for students isn’t necessarily the content of their studies, it’s staying focused. Digital distractions have quietly become one of the biggest obstacles to effective learning.

Research shows that simply having a mobile phone in sight can reduce concentration, as the brain is primed to anticipate alerts. Each time a student checks their device, it can take several minutes to regain the same level of focus. Over the course of a revision session, these small interruptions accumulate, significantly reducing productivity.

Tutoring provides an opportunity to address this issue directly. by creating a distraction free environment, tutors can model what focused, high-quality learning looks like. Encouraging students to silence notifications, place devices out of reach, or use apps that limit access to social media can make a remarkable difference. These adjustments help learners experience the benefits of deep, uninterrupted focus.

Of course, the solution isn’t to ban technology altogether. Instead, students benefit from learning how to manage it. Setting clear study intervals with built-in “phone breaks” can reduce the constant urge to check messages. In this way, balance becomes the key as students gain the freedom to stay connected, while still protecting their study time.

Importantly, learning to manage digital distractions builds discipline and independence. In an age of constant stimulation, the ability to focus deeply is becoming a rare and valuable skill. Where at university, in the workplace or in everyday life, those who can concentrate fully will always have an advantage.

Ultimately, tutoring is about much more than grades. It’s also about helping young people to develop habits that allow them to thrive. recognising and managing distractions is one of the most powerful habits of all and sometimes, the most effective study strategy is the simplest – turn the phone face down and give your full attention to the task at hand.

Isabella Naumovski

I am learning about leadership in Uni and this is what interests me. When learning about leadership this week, I thought about the importance of pride in being a good leader. This came about when I was watching a video on social media about ‘Tall Poppy syndrome’ in Australia. It is the ‘social tendency to resent, criticise, or cut down individuals who stand out due to their perceived success, achievements, or ambition’. I think recognising the hard work of the people around you is so important to be a good leader. This not only encourages the people around you to continue the good work, but boosts team morale. It is also important not to downplay your own achievements and to lead by example, cultivating an environment where working hard and being proud of achievements is something to be proud of. This applies to my role as a tutor as it is so important to encourage students to put in the effort when their peers might find this embarrassing. I think humility is talked about as a key aspect of leadership, I do think this is vital, however I think it is also important to share your successes with the people around you and show that hard work pays off. I am excited to post this on the discussion page to receive my peers thoughts on this topic and the place that ‘Tall Poppy Syndrome’ has in leadership, specifically Australian leadership.

Charlotte Ellis

A strategy that I have been implementing for younger students recently is incorporating a stronger feeling of choice or randomisation when doing questions. For example, when the student is completing a page of homework multiplication questions, I will put all of these questions into a random spinner wheel. They then get to spin the wheel and whichever question it lands on is the one that they complete next. This allows for the incorporation of what feels like a game, whilst still doing all of their work and learning. At times, I will also go a step further with this and make it a bingo game (I also play with the questions in different boxes), for a competition. These can be very effective strategies and can be manipulated in many ways. For example, to work both multiplication and division simultaneously, I will often put the answers to the multiplication into the spinner, and they will have to work out which question it fits with.

Another similar strategy is when I am coming up with numbers for an example question, I will get them to pick the numbers out themselves (or draw a card from the uno deck and the corresponding number is used). This makes them feel more included in their learning process and excited about working out the answer, keeping younger students engaged for longer periods of time, and finding enjoyment in their learning.

Riva Burkett

Through the creation of increasingly individualised, accessible and evaluative learning opportunities, artificial intelligence (AI) has revolutionised education for students. Additionally, helping to better assist teachers and provide global learning platforms are also major contributions to education.

AI has allowed teachers to tailor their educational approach at scale platforms. Instant feedback, content modification and difficulty level adjustments allow students to tackle content and assigned tasks in a way that suits their pace and compliments their unqiue learning styles and preferences.

Similarly, the improved accessibility of AI allows for a significant increase in student acess to education, particularly those with learning difficulties and disorders such as Dyslexia, Autism Spectrum Disorder, Attention Deficit Hyperactivity Disorder and visual/sensory impairments. For example programs like Speechify and NaturalReader allow stduents to interact more flexibly with textual content (PDFs, word documents etc.). Obstacles for those deaf/hard-of-hearing are also, more easy to address thanks to AI-powered captioning.

Additionally, astute evaluation and input AI allow for continuous assessment and evalutation to become possible in other ways than traditional high-stake testing. Educators are able to more easily make informed judgments regarding stduent capability and understanding, as well as the effectiveness of their implemented activities. As such, this allows for an accelerated learning rpocess for students to more readily recieve feedback and progress updates.

Assiting teachers via automatic repetetive processes such as grading and giving feedback allows teachers to concentrate on higher, more significant tasks and activities like developing meaningdul student-teacher relationships, lesson planning and one-on-one mentoring. Additionally, AI is easily able to identify which pupils needs extra help and can help create and provide instructional materials.

Finally, opportunities for global learning via AI helps to link students and educators across the globe, specifically by facilitating cross-cultural cooperative initiaves and communciation. AI enables a brilliant opportunity for international student relationships while simultaenously enabling teachers to give every student an increasingly mroe inclusive, interesting and successful education.

Katerina Vrahnos

Many students struggle with preparation for upcoming maths exams. They find themselves spending hours to complete all of the revision questions from their teacher, and still, as soon as they sit down to do the exam their mind wipes completely blank! This can happen for several reasons; common nerves or stress, a shock from seeing unexpected and tricky questions, or confusion because the teachers didn’t include the exact questions from the revision material, only questions that test the same concepts.

My solution? Math notes! I know it may seem and feel silly to make notes on a subject that isn’t tested on theory and instead the concepts, yet by building clear, organised notes can help shift your mindset to be able to identify which topic and skills you need to utilise to combat each individual question (instead of memorising a list of constricting questions)! In doing so, you are able to build the way you understand and retain information.

The best way to layout your notes is to have them by topic, as well as organising them into each sub-topics (i.e. for each chapter). When writing each formula, if you don’t already understand and have it memorised by heart, it is best to add in a fun mnemonic to help you remember it, as well as highlight what each component/variable means in each equation.

If you approach a topic that is particularly difficult, it will definitely help if you include examples of complex questions that you have done to help you remember the applications of the formulas needed! Not only does writing notes help you in the future before the exam for some final revision, but it also helps you process the material more thoroughly; allowing better recall in the exam room!

Sarah Constantinidis

When it comes to learning, not all environments are created equal. While large classrooms can offer a sense of community, one-on-one tutoring provides a more personalised and effective approach that meets the unique needs of each student.

In a big class, teachers often need to move at a set pace, balancing the needs of many students at once. This makes it difficult for struggling learners to keep up or for advanced students to be challenged enough. In contrast, one-on-one tutoring adapts completely to the learner. The tutor can slow down, revisit tricky topics, or skip ahead depending on the student’s understanding. This flexibility ensures that learning gaps are filled and confidence grows steadily.

Another key advantage is individual attention. In a crowded classroom, it’s easy for students to feel overlooked or hesitant to ask questions. Tutoring removes that barrier. The personalised setting creates a safe space where learners can express confusion without fear of judgment. This often boosts participation and helps students take ownership of their learning journey.

Tutoring also encourages stronger relationships between teacher and student. A tutor can quickly learn about a student’s strengths, weaknesses, and learning style, and adjust their teaching methods accordingly. This tailored approach often leads to improved grades, better problem-solving skills, and increased motivation to learn.

Thus, while large classes may have their place, one-on-one tutoring offers a personalised, supportive, and highly effective learning experience that empowers students to reach their full potential.

Saoirse Early

Tutoring isn’t just about “getting through homework” or “fixing mistakes”. It is about helping student’s build skills, confidence and a genuine love of learning. One of the most effective ways to achieve this is by incorporating a student’s own interests into the session. When learning is tied to something a child already enjoys such as sports, music, art or gaming it immediately becomes more engaging, relevant and motivating.

Unlike a classroom setting, tutoring offers the flexibility to tailor lessons to a student’s unqiue needs. With one-on-one attention, tutors can identify strengths and weaknesses, adapt teaching methods and move at a pace that ensures real understanding. Adding a student’s personal interests into this process further enhances engagement, focus and curiosity. This makes lessons feel less like a chore and more like an opportunity to explore ideas.

For example, when working on persuasive writing, student’s can write speeches on topics they are passionate about. Wriritng a speech can feel overwhelming but when it’s about something a child cares about, it becomes exciting. By connecting the task to personal interests, students naturally practise essential skills such as structuring an argument, providing evidence and appealing to an audience.

The result of this approach? Not only do they develop important writing skills, but they also gain confidence in sharing their ideas. When student’s discover that their own interests can be powerful enough to engage and write a meanigful speech, they learn that their voice is worth listening to. This means more than just a tutoring session but becomes something much larger by extending beyond the centre to create a meaningful impact.

Emily Wilcox

Today I had the chance to observe Jem’s session with her year 12 Standard Maths student. I found this session an interesting one to sit in on, noting the way that Jem collaborates with her maths students to build a sense of common understanding. This relationship is the product of consistency over a long period of time, and it’s clear that trust has been built, and the student feels comfortable thinking aloud, making mistakes, and then correcting them with Jem’s guidance.
Jem uses a combination of the student’s own notes, the textbooks in the centre, and online resources to anchor the concepts in practical examples. This takes quite a seamless form, and means the session is tailored to the specific needs of the student in the leadup to the HSC.

Throughout the hour, Jem worked through questions alongside her student, not in front of them. She encouraged the student to tackle each step while she modelled the reasoning process, often pausing to ask “why do you think this works?” or “what pattern do you notice here?” This helped her to reinforce and guide the student’s learnings without ever stepping into an overly authoritative instructive position.

Kate Ambrogio